When a writer needs discipline
to do their work
they are in hell—
much like a marine, with a crew cut
and their drill instructor
shouting at them.
Jumping Jacks
Pushups
Parade
Reveille
Just think what horrible thoughts
come out of bootcamp
Silly, inane, sexual thoughts
Somebody has control of your mind
and it might be you
There is no voice
inside your head
whispering to you
in the barracks
in the showers
or
on the obstacle course.
The rifle range is different, though
the heartbeat
between breaths
Zen Breathing
and careful aim.
Somebody who stands outside of life and death
makes for a great artist.
The willingness to kill, but not to use force
to let it happen
You are the dead man, walking
as you take careful aim
He is in your sights
and that empathy
is what every writer needs
before he kills
with his words.
Blood shooting
six feet
out of your back
A poem is relaxing
it’s not a hard thing
it doesn’t accomplish anything
it’s a soldier who knows
he will die
it’s brown and gold leaves
falling
from the sky.
Ooh-rah devil dog
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Very much subjective but intersects me at some junctions.
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It would be cool to have the objective truth! I could be like God, writing poetry!
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There are objective truths. But for an artist, it doesn’t matter. He is the god of his universe where he is free to creates his own version of reality. This impossible freedom is something we aspire as artists(poets).
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Amen! I couldn’t agree more, Kam Ran!
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I let someone read one of my recent poems yesterday, and she said it was too harsh! Too harsh? Poetry speaks truth, that’s all I have to say. 😉
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Poetry’s strength is its truth, whether that truth is beautiful, dark, or difficult.
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Yes, I agree. Thank you.
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I agree!
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Yes, most people hate poetry, and poetry tells the truth.
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Intense but very true description of life as a poet.
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Thanks for reading and commenting, timothyaltheia!!!
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