No matter how many flaws we hide
No matter how much color we add
Everything flows into a mix of confusion
We do not see what lies within
We do not know how alone we really are
We blend our picture with that of others
Sometimes we let them paint our canvas
and layers form
until the weight of wrong strokes
covers who we really are
We get painted into corners
and people look at the strokes they made
doodles of themselves
thinking they were yours
These false artists get angry
Disappointed in the picture they helped to make
Seeing failure
after much effort
Then they hang what they think they own
in a public place anyway
explaining it to others
Conjuring madness
Reminding people of their lives
dripping with someone else’s oil
The masses disdain what they see
but they can’t stop looking at it.
Very nice use of extended metaphor! I like it very much.
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Thanks Liz! 🙂
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I can relate.
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Excellent. So good….:)
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Thank you so much for the comment. 🙂
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My pleasure to read it 💞
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